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Should I utter her name again?

Will that bring me joy?

Should I forget about her?

That is the suggestion.

The only person who meant.

Has requested that I stop.

I must convince myself of lies.

I am better off alone.

You were never worth it.

Time is valuable with no one.

There are reasons my heart beats.

The bullet enters carfully.

Unintentionally destroying.

Point your fingers at your chest.

It's not the bullet that causes pain.

Wave to the hand that holds the gun.

Because it all feels like murder.

Foolish, killing yourself is suicide.
I want some attention, that's all.
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JacquelynAnn Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2004
i though i hadn't read it before but IT IS GOOD
did i tell you i love you.... well good 'cause i don't :favlove:
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
Thanks, I'll be sure to keep em coming!
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Sliktor Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
You seem to have a crowd of fans already yet I couldn't leave without commenting, It's amazing and confusing yet not confusing :s wierd but hey it's like opening questions and giving half and answer or atleast I think it is
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
Thanks, I'll be sure to keep em coming!
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
It's grown to be the crowd favorite lol!
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Insane-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
I really like this a lot. Very powerful. Wonderful work :nod:
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
It's grown to be the crowd favorite lol!
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doodydood Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Writer
Damn that is so good it gave me chills you are truly talented
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Photographer
Thank you!
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doodydood Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004   Writer
welcome
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Miseria-Cantare Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
I like the last few fines. Very straight to the point and powerful.

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“Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in
to the power of
the music that I write –
the power of
the music of the night…”


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Salembabe88 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2004   Writer
once again, i like it...i like how evry1 of ur poems so far relates 2 reality...awesome job...
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2004   Photographer
Thank you ever so kindly!
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Salembabe88 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2004   Writer
you're ever so welcome...
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insomnia-mae Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004   Writer
This is a good poem!!!!! thank you for having a looksie at mine. Yours is incredible!
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004   Photographer
No autographs, please.. hehe. OK, maybe one.
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insomnia-mae Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004   Writer
YAY!!!
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bLaCkDaWnRiSeS Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004
wow, i like how your writing really makes you think
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004   Photographer
Each piece usually takes at least 30 minutes to write.
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bLaCkDaWnRiSeS Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004
really..hmm do you have to think about each phrase or does it just sort of come to you
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004   Photographer
It's weird, I'll know what I want to write, then I have to construct it.
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palespiral Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004
amazing...simply amazing!
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004   Photographer
This one has been getting increasingly popular.
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palespiral Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004
It's no wonder why, it's amazing.
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Novacain Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004   Writer
Well Written, It's a good one, thanks for the post on mine...
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004   Photographer
No problem
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JacquelynAnn Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004
i never thought a free verse poem would appeal but i have to offer my congrats
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Shintot Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004   Photographer
Wow, what a compliment, thanks!
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jci345 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004
that is such a freakin awesome picture! Good Job!
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words4thetragic Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2004   Writer
damn that is sooo freakin good and that pic is insanley awesome....wo...thanks for the comment on my shit..literally shit lol!!! xOxO kayLa nicoLe
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