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Would you trust your life to me if I could save it?
Would you place it in my hands and sleep well tonight?
Do you know I care too much to not commit,
Every waking breath to make it right?

Would you ask me to stay all night to hold you?
Would you ask me to caress you while you sleep?
WIll you ask what more I can to show I'm true,
While I search the bridge my friends will try to leap?

Would you ask of me more than I can provide?
Would you think it's not enough when I had failed?
Do you want to know with whom you can confide,
While you look him in the eye who has prevailed?
I want to know if I'm a successful poet, if you read this, please answer with yes or no. If yes, read "A Boxing Match" also. Thanks everyone!
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Abosolutely :fave: