literature

Lost Soul

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Went down to visit my friends,
They moved to a warm paradise.
Should have asked for directions,
To avoid paying tolls, the price.
Can't blame my friends though, oh no,
I'm a man who makes his own mind.
Tried to build karma along the way,
Help fix a flat and better mankind.
Lunatics lined along the road,
Handing out papers of stories of old.
Thanks to teachers, family, friends,
I was warned of the lies they told.
That One could gift eternity,
Laughable! All I need is gold.


Now that I'm here I admit, I was wrong,
But at least I will never be cold.
I'm not sure if this is completed yet, but it still makes sense as is. There really should be more between the space... I REALLY don't like this poem, so if anyone else does I WILL BE surprised!
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l0stwhispers's avatar
Hm... interesting poem. =) I like the last two lines... wraps the poem up really nicely. =D